If you have sent episodes 1 and 2 reliably, readers will choose again around episode 3.
To see more or not.
So, while laying down the basic line for the main character to grow, it is necessary to show even the attractive points that differentiate it from other works within 3 episodes.
The story should be fresh and not feel burdensome.
A somewhat predictable story. So it should be a story with more expectations.
This work is a situation where the strand is caught in the action action drama where martial arts and magic harmonize against the background of modern times.
After organizing my thoughts, I got a sense of what kind of stage would be good.
In terms of the trend of this work, the place where the scene changes next would be the place where the fight is taking place.
As the main character jumps into a situation where the conflict between each faction cannot be stopped, the reader should be able to reasonably expect the main story from episode 4.
And it shows the ‘growth of the main character ③’ together.
for example… … .
[The writer is having fun.
“What kind of situation is the faction fighting against each other! There’s something good about it!” ]
It’s amazing. It’s okay to pretend!
[The writer opened the setup note. ]
great. Let’s go to the battlefield!
[The author added (Worldview*Background World).
“Let’s go to something like a dungeon.” ]
[The writer added (tribe*demon). ]
devil… … What?
[ The other side of the world (view of the world)
They have been appearing ever since the beginning of the dimensional collision.
* The demons that appear in the underworld are things that did not exist not only in modern times but also in Moorim and magical civilizations. For this reason, scholars explain that another dimension, that is, the dimension of demons and the current dimension, causes a collision to create the underworld.
* There is a devil who is the center of the underworld, and if you kill him, the underworld will disappear.
* You can obtain various loot by killing the demons of the underworld. Typically, the devil’s heart. What is called axim for short is used in various ways in modern society.
The world behind it is largely divided into three types.
1. Transformation: Since it is created based on the real material world, it enters through a structure such as a door in the real world.
There are structures of reality inside, but they have a dangerous deterioration different from the real reality.
2. Underground Type: It is created underground. So far, only one has been found in the world and has not been destroyed to date.
The scale is truly amazing, and the only floor that has been successfully captured is the 8th basement floor. No one knows where the end is, but it is called the ‘bottomless pit’.
If you think of a dark tunnel because it is made underground, you are mistaken. Each floor has a different natural environment.
It is not known where it started, but rumors say that ‘you can dig up the secret of the dimension collision if you reach the end of the underground’ and ‘you will gain the power of a divinity capable of anything’.
3. Summoning type: undecided]
[Building a world view (the world behind it) is over. ]
ah-ha, I see… … .
To our writer, there are things more important than story development… … . Ahahahahaha.
I never thought that demons + dungeons would pop up here.
In the meantime, I got a sense of why our writer failed so many times. I’ve been feeling it since the beginning, but I think it can be concluded.
That our writer Yangban is the best among the fans of the set.
If you come up with a good setting, you must have used it somehow to get it right, so it must have been a story that was in a hurry to show the setting.
The main character would have been a decoration.
At that moment, I heard an urgent sound from behind that seemed to represent my feelings.
“wait a minute! wait a minute!”
He was an employee of the embassy’s civil affairs office.
He gasped and said that he had been following me.
“The consul said, but I forgot.”
And what was put out was a ridiculously thick book.
「 Eastern Moorim and the Underworld (Korean Version) latest edition
– Published by the Embassy of the Moorim Federation in Korea – 」
“Most of the information you will need can be found here. If you have any further questions, please give us a call. Good luck!”
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[ The conceived writer is working on a new setting. ]
What are you going to do now?
The other side of the world has already melted into this world.
* * *
[The artist has modified the work information of ‘The World’s Strongest Man with Self-interest’. ]
[Reason for modification: Addition of the Underworld]
” Competition
(work information)
Title: The strongest person in the world with only self-interest
Author: God
Genre: Modern Fantasy
Work description: Due to the dimensional collision, the earth has been affected by several dimensions (Wurim, Fantasy, Devil).
And now.
Because Lee Hwan, the world’s strongest man, has returned.
‘I’m tired of living for others.’
All he wants now is self-interest. Even for the sake of completing the unfinished revenge.
# Regression # Modern # Moorim # Fantasy # Hunter # Constellation # Light Tower # Action # Action # Self-interest”
[ All(2)
The world’s strongest man with only self-interest – Episode 1
The strongest person with self-interested world view – Prologue ]
I sat at a nearby cafe and stared at the crazy settings and message windows. Iced Americano is bitter today.
Our author with a lot of greed.
It would be difficult to use just one of the many materials well, but they hit all the materials.
Will it be a delicious jjambbong budae-jjigae, or a mixed soup that is neither this nor that… … .
My thoughts were deep with such worries.
however.
Isn’t the person writing this, the author the author?
The person concerned is really happy, but why is the main character suffering from the worries that the writer should do?
But the problem is that I also think that it is not necessarily something to complain about.
Jeongyeon Apart from the promise that our writer will grant our wishes if we win first place, it is because we are very satisfied right now.
Things that people often choose as what they would like to be if they were born again, if they were possessed.
1. Billionaire rich 2. The world’s most powerful person 3. The world’s best-looking genius 4. The Munchkin protagonist of a fantasy world
If you choose between
Although there is a slight conflict between the face genius and the Munchkin protagonist.
I am also number 4
okay. Complaining is a luxury.
Is there a greater wish than the miracle I am enjoying right now?
The development of the story is behind the scenes, and consideration for the main character is lacking.
If you keep telling me, the author will get better someday.
Author. dear author, I am always rooting for you both as the main character and as a reader. The setting of the back world is also very good.
Loyalty! Loyalty!
total loyalty!
Anyway, I felt it on the way to the embassy, but I don’t see any other Moorim people besides me.
The same goes for heterogeneous people.
I soon lost interest in looking around with a curious mind.
I turned my attention to the book again.
This super-thick ＜The Eastern Murim and the Underworld, the latest version of the Korean version＞ was handed over after the other side world was set up.
It is true that it is a collection of settings by our author.
Paralock –
Information on the other side of the world was recorded, starting with the teenage munpa of this country, such as the three gates.
Even without trying to memorize it, I felt that it was naturally transferred to my memory.
It was when I turned the page to the Incident and Accident section.
[The writer is conceiving (The World*Daelim Piano Admissions Academy). ]
Along with the message window, the story of a different world began to be written on the blank page.
The artist made the stage, so now it was my turn.
* * *
[The author began (paragraph #2). – The strongest person in the world who only has self-interest, Episode 3]
【 2.
The breath he inhaled anew with his young body was fresh. Right now, my body is full of energy that I can do anything.
I will know once I die.
There is nothing more precious than this life that I live again day by day. I didn’t know this.
‘good night.’
Lee Hwan felt the breath coming into his young lungs again.
A common commercial building located in Miari.
＜Daelim Piano Entrance Examination Academy＞
The sign is the most noticeable from afar.
The place where Lee Hwan headed straight after leaving the embassy was nothing special from the outside.
However, security bureau agents armed with various firearms were burning double wicks in their eyes. Under his command, the police and riot police were holding out on the control line.
“Can’t you see this?”
The police went out to stop the approaching Lee Hwan. 】
“Can’t you see this?”
The policeman glanced at the warning sign saying, “Stop going.”
Since the attack is currently underway, citizens are urged to refrain from approaching.
There, even the specific provisions of several articles of the special law were kindly attached.
The battlefield I wanted wasn’t a dungeon like this… … It didn’t matter.
Whether it’s a battlefield, a dungeon, or any stage, anything that makes the main character stronger is okay.
Just stick with the original plan.
Instead of answering, I handed out the ID I had received from the embassy.
At first, the police looked at it with the gaze of what this was.
However, the moment he found out that what I had presented was Moorim’s second-class ID, he reacted the same way as the civil affairs staff at the embassy.
I couldn’t take my eyes off the number stamped there with my two wide-eyed eyes.
I was able to get inside the control line, which was pulled up by the police.
“wait a minute. Please give me your ID again.”
Then a woman approached.
A suit, not a police uniform. And judging from what came out of the container, like a temporary headquarters, located inside the control line, the Security Bureau… … ? I think he’s from Iran.
[The author added (person*Shin Eun-ah).
“A person you will encounter often. It’s rough at first, but I’d like a character who follows the main character in the end. as a beauty! That’s not the female lead.” ]
A new character appears?
[ Shin Eun-ah (character)
belonging to the Safety Bureau.
Takes on-site control when the underworld occurs. We are also preparing for the case where the hidden world explodes into the real world. In addition, it is also used to wipe out criminal organizations and terrorists using martial arts and magic.
He is also in charge of the lawless zone created by the black magicians, and is suffering from overwork.
＜Cat statue＞ ＜Explosives＞ ]
Maybe it was because the author focused on building the setting while drinking Aah at a cafe, but I learned it naturally the moment I saw the character description, even though it was the first time I saw it.
[The writer has (episode*reaping henchmen) in mind. ]
[ Reaping Thugs (Episode)
Content: Shin Eun-ah, who often runs into Lee Hwan.
Then, as a result of an incident, he learns from Lee Hwan in the one-conscientiousness method and the one-two-sword sword method. From then on, he becomes Lee Hwan’s absolute henchman. ]
It is true that I was briefly tingled with the message of the episode.
however.
[ The writer added (Martial Arts * One Conscience Act). ]
[The writer added (Martial Arts*Il-Yang Chi-Gyeok method). ]
New martial arts are always welcome. As long as it’s a rising school!
