A Genius Writer Loved by an Actress 2
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Without giving me a chance to think, the letters flew by and a colorful home screen appeared.
what?
He leaned forward and moved closer to the screen. Curiosity outweighed fear.
At first glance, the home screen looked similar to Webflix’s configuration, but upon closer inspection, it was completely different.
What can I say? Would you say it’s tasteless?
Webflix is a list of endless works. If it is the mountain and the sea of the work and the work,
There were only about a dozen works in Genius Writer.
‘What’s so sluggish? Is it a minor channel, so there are no subscribers and no works? Even if it’s free, I won’t be able to see it…’
I feel a strange sense of alienation and my eyes twinkle,
“Uh, uh, these… these are my creations.”
Familiar titles!
Surprisingly, only a dozen of those episodes were mine, written by me. My works are stored one after another in the notebook script folder.
I closely followed the screen, examining each piece carefully.
“Are you sure.”
Obviously, these are the works I’ve written so far.
From high school until now, the synopsis was the work I had in mind.
Short dramas, feature films, movies, and even variety shows and webso. All articles were included.
I was sure to open my eyes wide and look at the works over and over again.
“OMG. Even baristas don’t know coffee.”
The one-act play ＜Baristas Don’t Know Coffee＞, which had just been completed, was at the top. Even if it’s clumsy, there’s even a thumbnail of a woman brewing coffee.
Did I unconsciously plagiarize other works? Or has my work been plagiarized?
“No. Bacomo was just finished.”
I could not rationally explain this situation. When I was bewildered, the first thing I did was look at the work.
Then it will be clear what happened.
I swallowed dry saliva and pressed my eyes tight against Bakamo’s thumbnail. The screen transitioned smoothly to the next screen.
The screen that passed was also similar to the composition of Webflix. Simple information such as the plot and genre of the work appeared at the top, and the episodes appeared at the bottom.
I read the work information carefully.
＜Barista does not know coffee＞
‘Chaerin’, who works at the cafe ‘Black Baek’, has never formally learned coffee, but comforts the hearts of customers with her innate sensibility and coffee skills.
Genre: Human Healing
Directed by: TBD
cast: undecided
Script: Yoon Jae-ho
“Oh, too. my work is correct My name is written in the script.”
Information about the director and actors has not been decided, but my name, Yoon Jae-ho, was written in the script. There was no need to question any more.
“I wonder, I wonder.”
When it became clear that it was my work, I was so curious about what the drama would be like, so I got impatient.
With trembling hands, he quickly pressed the turn. It was a one-act play, so there was only one episode.
“quickly. look at me I want to see what happened.”
Pressing his excited heart, he concentrated on the screen. The screen went black for a moment, then quickly filled with color.
And then the actors came out and played the lines according to the script I wrote.
Without realizing it, my body was attached to the TV. Don’t miss out on a single video or even a single line.
I was immersed in the drama without taking a proper breath.
“It’s lame.”
However, as the scene progressed, it became disappointing. Something was a bit awkward. Actors acting and directing.
Reenactment The appearance and acting patterns of the actors, whether they are actors or AI. poor directing skills.
just that much.
Overall, everything looked dry.
“It’s a work that I put a lot of effort into… Why is this like this?”
I was upset, but
“no. It must be because the video is faithful only to the script. The director and actors have not been decided yet. In the music industry, it’s like a demo tape. It’s bound to be dry and dull. Let’s take the outside of the script into consideration and just match the script.”
I worked hard to change my mind and focused more on the video.
The drama was running through scene 7.
#7. Black and white (daytime)
Chaerin is brewing drip coffee at the counter.
When hot water is poured on the beans, white steam and bubbles rise up.
The brewed coffee is served in front of customers.
After taking a sip of coffee, the guest lets out a thin sigh.
“It tastes more bitter than last time.”
“Sometimes I think it’s okay to add pain to pain.”
The customer sees Chaerin and smiles.
“I think I was Icarus flying toward the sun. I thought I could hold the sun in my hand, but it burned out before I could hold it in my hand.”
“Failure isn’t always bad. And it’s not a failure until you give up.”
“Is that so?”
“sure.”
Chaerin smiles lightly.
stop! stop!
After seeing this, I hurriedly pressed the pause button on the remote control.
“Dog Explosion!”
My face was so hot I couldn’t keep looking at it. I threw the remote control and went into bed in a fit of spasm, putting my head into the duvet.
Arbitrary and pretentious lines.
clichéd and awkward speech.
I thought it was appropriate when I read it in writing, but when I heard it through the actor’s mouth, it was cramped and I couldn’t stand it.
“Ah, what is Icarus and what is the sun? It’s not some kind of novel. Oh really!”
The struggle of a new writer who was excited to jump out was visible. A problem that was invisible even after seeing it a hundred times in writing was clearly revealed in one video.
I was embarrassed and kicked the duvet a million times. I kicked and kicked until I was exhausted and the shame was gone. But after a while, I thought about what this channel was.
‘Is this a curse sent by God to make me realize what a trashy writer I am? Why is it so cruel?? If you just keep getting rejected, you’ll realize it yourself… Did I do something wrong… No. Jaeho Yoon. It’s not… This channel is a godsend!’
As my thoughts changed, a positive mind dominated me.
Looking at the video of what I wrote, I can clearly see where I went wrong. Even the parts that I couldn’t see at all when I saw it in writing.
“Then, you can fix it.”
Just watch the video and fix it until it looks natural. I didn’t know that, so I wrote that. Now I know I can fix it properly.
“okay. You can fix it until you hear a genius writer. Scene 7 has already been quoted. We’re not going to be like this, let’s fix it right now.”
Thinking of Scene 7 that came to mind again, I sat down at my desk like crazy.
turned on the laptop. Click on Barcomo and find Scene 7.
And I went straight to editing.
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Knock Knock Knock Knock Knock Down
#7. Black and white (daytime)
Clear and transparent piano music flows,
Black and white tones surround the entire store.
The bar has an Urbane uk42 grinder, a slare espresso machine, a pitcher rinser, a brewhouse weighing scale, a Rasado leveling tool, and a Casio dripper.
‘right. A little more clearly from the cafe setting. Oh, the props come to mind by itself.’
dat-da-da-da-dao-
‘Chaerin’ brews drip coffee with skillful skills.
A dark-red coffee is served in front of the customer ‘Jung-woo’ in a gold-rimmed pumpkin-shaped coffee cup.
Jung-woo takes a cup of coffee and carefully takes a sip.
Chae-rin looks at his expression, wondering what kind of taste Jung-woo will taste.
Jungwoo: (exhales lightly) The bitter taste is stronger than last time.
Chaerin: It is said that the taste of coffee depends on the person’s heart. ···You must have spent a lot of time today.
Jung-woo looks at Chae-rin once and smiles.
Jungwoo: Lately, I have been very sweet. (Ha- sigh)
Chaerin: (while rinsing the filter) They say that you need to know the bitter taste of coffee to feel the true sweetness. Would everything be like that?
Jungwoo nods his head and takes another sip.
Jungwoo: (Looking at the coffee) … It’s amazing. Bitter coffee is sweeter than sweet coffee.
Chaerin smiles softly.
oh okay great.
The article is written very well.
Much cleaner and more natural lines.
The expressions, movements, and movements of the actors are clearly revealed.
Expressions that were thought to be difficult pop out as if they were pulled out of a vending machine.
The childishly glamorous curatorial presentation was transforming into a luxury drama.
“done. it’s over!”
After finishing, I looked at my watch. It was a 5 minute cut.
As soon as I saw the video, I figured out how to fix it, so 5 minutes was enough.
If I could only write like this, it would be a bitch. Time is the writer’s enemy.
“Then, let’s check if we’ve fixed it.”
With great anticipation, I picked up the remote control on the floor and went into the channel. I was a little worried that there would be no revision check function.
“It’s not a curse from God, it’s a blessing. I’m sure you’ll be able to see the revised version as well.”
I pressed my anxious heart down and looked at the screen. Fortunately, the upgrade button was flashing on the cover of the Baccomo.
“Ohh. The drama has been upgraded, right?”
The upgrade button seemed to mean that the drama was modified. My nervous heart melted like spring snow.
Without delay, I went into the work and pressed the turn.
However, the drama did not play immediately like before.
instead,
[Are you sure you want to check the revision?]
[30 points will be deducted]
[Yes / No]
A message popped up.
point? At first I just let you see it, but do you need points to see the revised version?
I was confused for a moment. It feels like the brakes are suddenly applied while going straight. I paused for a moment and thought for a moment.
‘Points? okay. I remember In the beginning, I got congratulations on joining.’
“Was it 100 points?”
Once I put the excitement in my chest, I came out to the home screen with a sober head. Because any information starts from the home screen.
“Where are you? my point.”
When I looked for it with my eyes wide open, I found the ‘Point’ button in the upper left corner without difficulty. There was also a ‘grade’ and ‘shop’ button next to it, but I didn’t pay attention to that because what I needed right now was a point.
“Let’s check.”
I pressed the point button.
Hold points: 100p
At first, it was right to receive 100 points to congratulate you on joining.
“Kyah, okay. There are points, so I can check the revised version.”
I was going to return to the drama again, but a guideline under the points I held caught my eye. It was an explanation of how to earn points.
Vocabulary is the power of the writer
Copy the Korean dictionary on paper.
20 points for each card.
Ratings are the power of writers
Points are awarded according to the actual viewer rating ratio.
•There are always events and unexpected missions.
Take the chance.
I don’t know what it is yet, but it seems like a channel is a system that operates by earning and deducting points.
“I need to manage my points well.”
Back to the Barcamo page again.
[Would you like to check the revision?]
[30 points will be deducted]
[Yes / No]
I pressed ‘yes’ without hesitation, and the drama started right away.
The same screen as the first one you saw. The only thing that changed was scene 7.
“Since we only modified scene 7, only scene 7 was modified. I was so excited earlier that I lost my temper. You should have edited the whole thing. If only I knew I needed points like this to check revisions.”
It was regrettable, but fortunately, the modified scene 70,000 was perfect.
After that, the drama was the same as the first time. Moderately childish, pretentious, awkward, and cheesy.
However, this time it was less shocking. Because the idea of how to fix it came first rather than the one-dimensional feeling of shame.
By the time the idea for the entire revision was over, the drama was over.
“done. Then, let’s revise the whole thing and check again.”
I lifted the remote control to turn off the TV.
[Would you like to check the expected ratings?]
[You can check the expected viewership rating after purchasing it in the store]
A message popped up again.
Can I know the expected viewership rating?
I really like this channel.
